Poetry Drawer: Dust by Bruna Vitacca

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You start your life in mud.

You craft and learn new tricks.

Your spirit’s born in blood;

You hunt with rocks and sticks.

 

The day you lost your primal gills,

You worked with tools, you played with fire.

Good manners, words, fine motor skills

All techniques you must acquire.

 

Many wars and treaties later,

Paint your present like a painter.

Now you’re ready, swap the cavern

For the plastic house with pattern.

 

Earthly treasures please your pocket;

There’s nothing you’d not buy.

Tricks and lies live in your locket

Play your cards until you die.

 

Conquer new worlds! Your greatest ambition;

Greeting the nations became your new vision.

You live among stars, within iron and steel,

Competing and beating to find the best deal.

 

Oh, great deceiver, stir up passions!

Steal their lands and rob them blind!

Power games will be old fashioned;

Schemes and scams left far behind.

 

Your barren earth expels formations,

None of them are God’s creations.

You.

Too old to be human, too new to be rust;

Begin a new chapter before you are dust.

 

 

Easter Poetry Drawer: Never chase your chickens by Helen Kay

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I wanted sitting ducks, dust-bathing.

My hands raked the air, erring.

Half-ruffled hens shook, shocked,

fled to shade, distressed, distrusting.

 

Watching, father said take time, tame.

Let the twitching hens come, calm.

Gently fold feather-fingers

to clasp pulsing bodies, buddies.

 

Now writing, I scribble, scrabble

to catch flighty thoughts, fight

to hold on. They elude, evade,

crouch in hedges aggrieved, afraid.

 

Envoi

Father’s echo comforts, confirms

not to chase chickens; luck follows fallow

times, melts on the mind, mine,

here to stay, not scared, stroked,

 

hatching memories that hold him close.

 

Easter Special: Inky interview with poet Helen Kay

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You have written a wonderful collection of verse called The Poultry
Lover’s Guide to Poetry. Can you tell us about your journey of writing the
poems and what inspired you at the time?

The pamphlet is inspired by my five silkie hens, but is also about childhood memories of my family keeping chickens. The first poem about never chasing your chickens caused me to think about how chicken poems could enable me to explore different themes in a new way. Some things I did not think of at first, for example, the gender issue and the role of my father.

You have also been working on poetry about dyslexia, being a tutor
yourself. Can you give us an example, or a snippet of a poem? What is it
about dyslexia that fascinates you?

So the first two lines of the dyslexia sequence could be this, but it may change:

in the beginning was a din of words

the lexical vomit of paint on salt dough

I think this sequence is a lot more emotional than the first one- I felt I have to write it. We all know what dyslexia is and lots of good things are being done to support dyslexic learners, but there are still many painful experiences and it can become overlooked. I also wanted to look at the creative potential of dyslexia and other ways of using language.

Being a Sylvia Plath fan, which poem would you choose and why?

Tulips. The way Plath responds to the kindly meant flowers in a negative, but creative way says so much to me about mental health.

Have you always written poetry from a young age?

Yes I have always scribbled poetry, though there were big gaps where other things, such as children, took over. At a recent school reunion a friend still had a school magazine with some of my poems in. I wrote my first hen poem when I was eight and can remember the first line: ‘a fluff or a puff is my silkie called Fairy’.

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What is your creative space like? Do you have a study or write
on-the-go, or both?

We live in a small house, so my space is in bed with a netbook and a bag of popcorn or on the living room table. Being around my family keeps me grounded. I am a lark; my best writing time is between 5 and 8 in the morning.

What else do you care about? What themes keep cropping up in your
work?

I care about too many things, for example, I have written a few poems about what is happening in the NHS and other news items. I write about friends in hopes of healing pain or celebrating good things. People, and how they connect with places, are very important in my poems. Friends have to be beware that they might end up in a poem! I am also interested in environmental issues and the interface of town and country.

As a poet, you are perhaps very observant! What is the funniest
conversation you have overheard?!

I love conversations on trains, especially mobile phone ones, where you imagine the receiver. A few months ago, during one of those gales, I heard a drunk man on Wigan Station, telling his girlfriend that he wasn’t coming back and half an hour later he was saying he was catching the next train home. Odd how people spill out their emotions in public and how narratives, in this case, predictably, develop.

 Which other poets inspire you?

I am inspired by many contemporary poets: Judy Brown, Hannah Lowe, Helen Mort, Jane Weir, Mark Doty, Ian Duhig. Yeats is always special. There are so many good poets; some are there to challenge me and others just open my eyes to something or embody how I feel.

Tell us about one of the best days of your life.

Well one of the most exciting poetry things was when I won the Wigan Greenheart competition in 2012. I went to the ceremony and I did not know I had won. The prize was £1,000 which was mine to spend on poetry.

What plans have you got for the future?

.At the moment I am spreading my wings to do a small performance based on the chicken poems. I am also trying help develop local poetry groups. I help with the poetry strand of The Words & Music Festival held in Nantwich every year. I don’t tend to think of long term goals. As you get older you realise things just happen.

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Special Book Launch: Inky Interview: James L. Weaver

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Today we’re joined by James L. Weaver, author of the adult thriller Poor Boy Road, the first in the Jake Caldwell series. Released this week – congratulations James! – it already seem to be a hit with readers.

Let’s start at the start! What were you like at school? Were you good at English?

I was a good student overall, but could have been excellent if I’d really applied myself. I did well in English when the subject appealed to me, but I vehemently hated Shakespeare and poetry and fared poorly in those areas. 10th Grade did result in my first true creative writing endeavour – some fantasy tale about a knight and a monster that is embarrassingly bad. I think it’s still stashed in my basement somewhere. I had a creative writing class in college at Kansas State University taught by a woman named Nina Hajda who was an aspiring writer herself. Her praise and encouragement helped spark the idea that I had at least some measure of ability.

Do you write full-time or part-time? Do you have a special time to write or how is your day structured?

I write part-time, usually between the hours of 10 pm and midnight. I have a full-time job, two active kids who keep my wife and I running around, and a handful of television shows I refuse to give up. I usually sit at our kitchen table with my laptop and write. Sometimes it’s a paragraph, sometimes a chapter, sometimes three or four chapters. There are times when I know what I’m spewing sucks and I give up for the night. I’d like to say I write every day, but it would be a lie. If I’m stuck on a plot point, I might let it stew for a day or two before the resolution reveals itself.

How do you think you’ve evolved creatively since the first thing you wrote?

I’ve studied the craft and read a hell of a lot more by people who do it well than when I started. I thought you could just sit down and pound out a story and the agents would come running! Maybe that’s true for the select few, but I learned a ton reading Stephen King’s book On Writing and Don’t Murder Your Mystery by Chris Roerden. I’ve learned that you can outline and plot all you want, but the story will take you where it wants go – fight it at your peril.

The book is part of the Jake Caldwell series, tell us a little about it?

I absolutely love authors who write about the same character in different settings and adventures. John Sandford’s Lucas Davenport, James Patterson’s Alex Cross or Lee Child’s Jack Reacher. I love finding the Easter Eggs they drop referring back to previous tales. You can read them as a stand-alone novel, but you grow with their characters and can’t wait for the next one to be released.

So, this is the first of the Jake Caldwell novels. The “sequel” Ares Road is set in Kansas City and will be a faster paced book. We’re targeting a 2017 release though I would love to get it out by Christmas. I’m tinkering with some plot ideas for the third book, but I love that I can literally take Jake and put him anywhere in the world in any circumstance and spin a tale without having to rely on what happened in the book before. I find that non-linear track very attractive.

Do you read much and if so who are your favourite authors? What book/s are you reading at present?

I try to read as much as I can because I think it keeps your writing fresh. There’s a handful of authors whose books I will either pre-buy or get as soon as they hit the shelves. In addition to Sandford and Child that I mentioned above, Stephen King is a must buy for me and I’m dying for Gillian Flynn to release another book. Her stuff is amazing.

I just finished an outstanding book called All the Light We Cannot See by Anthony Doer. Fantastic imagery and story-telling. I’m currently reading an advanced reader copy of A Falling Friend which is set for an April release from Lakewater Press.

If you could have been the original author of any book, what would it have been and why?

Ooooh, good question. You can’t tell, but I’ve been sitting here drumming the keyboard for a good couple of minutes trying to come up with a good answer. My favourite all time book would probably be The Stand by Stephen King so I’ll go with that. King is such a master of setting a scene and telling the tale that blurs the line between the natural and supernatural.

What advice would you give to aspiring writers? Do you have any tips for readers or advice for other writers trying to get published?

Step One: Find something you want to write. If you try and write what you think others will want to read, it will show.

Step Two: Write it, spend a little time pulling your hair out in the editing process, then put it away for at least a month or two. Then go back and rewrite it.

Step Three: Give it to someone who will give you an honest opinion. I wrote a blog on it several months ago, but you have to have multiple people who will tell you what sucks, what’s unbelievable, what’s awesome, what connected with them and what fell flat. Nothing’s worse than getting back your book and all they tell you was “It’s good”. That doesn’t help me!

Step Four: Polish from your reviewers’ feedback. Kill those darlings!

Step Five: Find an editor. Nothing’s worse than reading a book and having to edit it in your head. I’ve stopped many a self-published novel because I can’t get into the tale for mountain of little things a good editor would have caught.

Step Six: Start shopping for an agent or publisher. Just as you would with your novel, have someone you trust critique your query letter.

Step Seven: While you’re waiting for the pre-printed rejection letters to hit your mailbox or the agents not to respond at all, enter your work in writing contests. You’ll get great feedback and you never know what could happen or what doors it will open.

The most important thing is DON’T GIVE UP!

What about non-literary entertainment? What are your top rated television shows?

I love to work-out and run. As for TV, this can be a little controversial and I’m sure I’ll get a “How can you leave XYZ off your list?” But, my best all-time television shows are: The Walking Dead, Sons of Anarchy, The Shield, Breaking Bad, Friday Night Lights and Battlestar Galactica (the new one, not the campy 80s one). If you haven’t binge watched any of those, do so now…and buy Poor Boy Road so you have something to do while your Netflix or Amazon Prime is buffering.

Favourite All-Time Movie?

The Shawshank Redemption.

What can readers who enjoy your book do to help make it successful? How can readers discover more about you and you work?

Tell other people about it! Tell them you just read Poor Boy Road and it blew your socks off! Seriously though, if you like it, post a review on Amazon or Goodreads. If someone tells me about a book, I do look at the reviews and see what kind of feedback it’s received to see if I want to invest my diminishing free time on it. It also encourages the author to write more. We authors are a self-doubting bunch at times and need a little positive reinforcement to keep the juices flowing.

Shoot me an email at weaverbooks@gmail.com. Follow me on Twitter @WildcatJim2112. I do have another book out there called Jack & Diane – a coming of age tale that anyone who grew up in the 80s will enjoy and relate to. I also have a blog called weaverwrites.wordpress.com that I need to post more on.

Fantastic! Thanks so much, James. We’ll be sure to read and review Poor Boy Road as soon as possible.

If you want to purchase your own copy, here might be the perfect place to start Amazon.co.uk

 

 

Special Book Launch: Inky Interview with author R.L. Martinez

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We’re delighted to welcome author R.L. Martinez to the Pantry today. With her first fantasy, In the Blood, released today (review to come), it seems like a fitting time to question her about all things writing related!

Hi R.L., thank you so much for joining us. So, let’s start at the beginning, what were you like at school? Were you good at English?

I was one of those middling students – not popular, but not an object of ridicule. In high school I took part in colour guard so I had a small, tight circle of friends I enjoyed spending time with.

Besides maths, school was pretty easy for me so I maintained high grades throughout college and university – particularly in English and literature classes. But I think the main reason for that is I actually love to learn. I think I would still be in school today if I could afford it. And I was always an avid reader, so I had bits and pieces of information floating around in my brain at all times.

Do you write full-time or part-time? Do you have a special time to write, or how is your day structured?

Well, that’s a tricky question. I stay at home (my husband works) but not necessarily by choice. I’ve tried finding paying work outside of the house for three years now and have been unsuccessful. And, though you would think that allows me to write all day, I have two small sons (four and six years old), one of whom is not in school yet. So, I’m not able to spend very much time on my writing during the day.

How do you think you’ve evolved creatively since the first thing you wrote?

One of my biggest developments as a writers is losing my penchant for over description and purple prose. College and various writing workshops/critique sessions have whittled me down to a cleaner, more straightforward storyteller. I sometimes still meander towards overwriting, but am better able to see that when doing revisions. Plus, I have beta readers and an editor who help shave off unnecessary descriptions and words.

This book is part of what looks set to be a bestselling series; tell us a little about it?

The Witchbreed is a loose trilogy that follows members of the Dominax family and their adventures (e.g. misadventures) in a pre-industrial world on the verge of world war. The first two books revolve around twin sisters Oriabel and Ottilde Dominax, while the third book focuses on Oriabel’s child.

Do you read much and if so who are your favourite authors? What book/s are you reading at present? If you could have been the original author of any book, what would it have been and why?

Reading is my second favourite pastime! I try to read a book a week – though that doesn’t always happen. Some of my favourite authors are Sharon Shinn, Jane Austen, Stephen King, Marge Piercy, Joy Harjo, Margaret Atwood, Charles Dickens, Sherman Alexie, Toni Morrison, and Michel Faber.

Hmmm… If I could have authored any book… well, I guess I would say I wish I had already authored the books that are still in my pipeline. I wish they were all already out in the world.

What advice would you give to aspiring writers? Do you have any tips for readers or advice for other writers trying to get published?

  1. Keep EVERYTHING you write. Even if you think it’s horrid and will never use it, keep it.
  2. Read. A lot. Nothing irritates me more than hearing other authors dismiss the need to read widely and deeply. And you might be surprised to know just how many writers think reading is unimportant to their craft. To me, that is the height of disrespect and amateur thinking.

For readers I would say, don’t force yourself to read a book you aren’t absolutely loving – I say that even if you are reading MY book at the moment. What a waste to slog through stories that do not engage you! Life is way too short for that sort of nonsense.

As for writers hoping to be published, I advise taking a good, honest look at your skills when deciding between indie and traditional publishing. For example, I like many aspects of indie publishing (ultimate control over product being paramount), but I just do not have the marketing mind to make it successful. So, I might be able to put out a decent book with a pretty cover, but it will never go anywhere because I don’t know how to get it into readers’ hands. Take a look at my one – and only – indie-published title, Wild Horses Don’t Stop at Whoa. I have still never received a penny for it because I’ve never been able to reach the minimum number of sales for Amazon to send me a royalty check.

What can readers who enjoy your book do to help make it successful? How can readers discover more about you and you work?

Write a review! Reviews and person-to-person recommendations are the best marketing out there. Every time you tell someone about an author you’ve enjoyed, you’ve helped increase that author’s reach.

If you want to learn more about my work, visit my website at http://robinLmartinez.com

Yes, we say definitely check out and follow R.L., if the first reviews of her book are anything to go back, she’s about to make some serious waves in the fantasy book network! And, if you’d like to read – and review! – In the Blood, these links might help!

http://www.amazon.co.uk/Blood-Witchbreed-Book-1-ebook/dp/B019X8WCWI/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1458575808&sr=8-1&keywords=in+the+blood+martinez

https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/8121315.R_L_Martinez

Thanks so much for joining us, R.L., we wish you all the best!

Lyrical Craft: Interview with musician Mick Masser by Deborah Edgeley

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Can you tell Ink Pantry about your Video Theatre?

My Video Theatre project had varied reasons for its emergence; personal and professional reasons dictated a new start. When I left Sheffield, I no longer had a band or studio. I’ve always wanted to ‘get on with it’, and also finding the right band can be a long and disappointing task. Moreover, studio allows for your full imagination and bands have been a skeletal idea – like acoustic versions of an idea. I wanted to draw on all my musical inspirations in a flexible, eclectic way. It has allowed me to explore with complete freedom from classical to dub, prog and pop. Anything! I like the holistic, and wanted to explore my interest in the elements of all the arts, hence each song has its own symbolic video that relates to the lyrics via a collection of animated stills. I play with the relationships relating the translation in a kind of vice versa symbiosis. So metaphors become literal and so forth. It’s fun!

I didn’t want it to be a simulation so I make it obvious that it’s a studio production. I mix the tracks via PA at volume; very dry so it has a live flavour. The beats are basic and percussive and the sounds are cut and paste loops, like how dance music is created. The bass parts are BIG and done as performance with traditionally played bass, which for me is crucial. The organic flavour creates the juxtaposition against the laptop; the irony – Primitively Modern: the title of the project. The overall content explores this concept throughout from Mayan history to modern issues. The stuff we talk about round the campfire!

You have been writing lyrics for many years. Can you give us a history of your journey as a songwriter? 

My journey as a lyricist has emerged from the punk ideal. Allowance to speak. Having something to say was the motivation to play. An observational approach has diversified over the years and inspiration now comes from spiritual issues and imagining being born under a paving slab!

Can you share with us a couple of your own favourite lyrics?

There are many of my lyrics I like. The crap gets thrown away. One of my faves is anecdotal; simple but big like a haiku. ‘Rooms in houses uncannily did this to me.’ This comes from a focus on idiosyncrasy/constructs. ‘Rooms in Houses’ is from a collection of songs called ‘Common Scenarios of Quite a Strange Man’.

Who inspires you, lyrically? 

Again, loads of inspiring lyrics and writers. Peter Gabriel’s US album is lyrically beautiful, and the Lighthouse Family say some nice things. In contrast, I like the inarguable and simple statements that Discharge used to make too. Hawkwind’s single sentence ‘Space is there’ is, of course, implosively poetic.

Do you read a lot? What book has affected you the most?

Never get time to read. A Kestrel for a Knave has done much to shape the way I think, particularly the implications in institutionalised learning. Billy’s skills and motivations are not on the curriculum. When he finds his true interest, he’s an A-star pupil.

You live on a boat, away from the rat race. Is this the perfect, peaceful setting for a creative person? 

Paint a picture of your day for us.

I live two lives on the boat; week on, week off with my boys. This is a good symbiosis because my domestic week grounds me from a workload that has me awake at ridiculous times and drinking too much coffee. It is delightful when I get to do boater things. I like the resourcefulness such as having solar energy, sawing logs, etc. The relaxing moments with candles, fire and hooting owls are well earned. Of course, my ever changing ‘garden’, I’ve no doubt, is unconsciously calming and inspiring.

Do you think like a poet, perhaps in images, or do ideas come first, then images?

I think in an integrated way, but the visual arts have much to do with the abstraction. It’s all about juxtaposition, texture, composition. I work lyric to maximise meaning in a mind map way and choose words that strengthen a previous reference; like an echo. Put simply…moon, dark, night, stars, etc. It seems obvious but clearly when writing it’s more interesting than that. It has to be, of course!

How do you motivate yourself to write? Or is it an innate passion that constantly needs release?

I used to sit and sing nonsense with guitar and catch/shape lyric as it spilled out. These days, I build soundscapes starting with experimental sounds and loops as well as conventional playing. The ‘painting’ in turn inspires lyric and story.

What do you care about? Which themes keep cropping up in your work?

Spiritual freedom, harmony, peace and being happy. I used to have a lot to say. Now I change the world from where I can actually do something about it – from within. I trust my feelings. I try to be nice. I’m absolute about boundaries. If I’m uncomfortable, I have the right to leave and not have to answer for it.

Tell us about one of the best days of your life.

I have two best days: the days my boys were born. I love them to bits – as you do! They map my future and fill me with purpose. They grow and provide me with continually changing interest.

Any plans for future projects?

Every intention for continual future projects. I have irons in a few fires. I’ve been enjoying writing top lines with harmony for some great producers recently and now have an opportunity to travel too. The variety is great stimuli and takes me to fresh musical/lyrical places (mainstream with a touch of craft). Such co-writes yet again present new landscapes from the imaginations of other artistes, thus stimulating new lyric territory. It helps give my own work a rest and recharge. My Video Theatre remains paramount as it is the vehicle for my deepest thoughts and experiences. It also grants poetic licence unlike the former, which comes with a label brief. Quite difficult at times.

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Inky Interview: Open University’s Dr Mike Johnson by Patricia M Osborne

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When it comes to writing, what is your preferred genre?

Definitely poetry! I love the play between condensed and yet multiple possibilities of meaning that poetry can offer. I often aim at ‘crossover’ poems i.e. ones that may appeal to a wide age-range and/or push through genre borders.

How easy is it to fit your writing around your work?

Surprisingly difficult: because teaching Creative Writing requires a spectrum of constructive critical perceptions, it can be difficult to get over these when starting my own pieces. Sadly, my first reaction to something just written is often, ‘Hm, I have read something like this before.’

Is there a special time or place you like to write and what motivates you?

In bed, early morning for getting first ideas down, then re-drafting can be any-place, anytime (and endless). Motivation comes from literally anywhere: general life events, partially heard conversation on the train, TV, radio, music, reading (of course), the Internet and so on.

Who is your favourite poet and why?

Wow! That is a difficult one. But if you are going to restrict me, I would have to say Stevie Smith, because she was so unique.  Rules (both structural and semantic)  were meant to be broken for her and she could convey so much in a few words. ‘Not Waving But Drowning’ is a most incredible poem.

As a writer it is also important to be a reader. What are you reading right now? What are some of your favourite books?

For poetry, see above: plus (in no particular order), S T Coleridge, Steve Sneyd, Emily Dickinson, Edward Lear and Miroslav Holub. For prose: favourites are Solaris – Stanislaw Lem, short stories by J L Borges, Cat’s Eye – Margaret Atwood,  Frankenstein – Mary Shelley, the Alice books – Lewis Carroll. (These lists do tend to change frequently.)

I am currently reading Music at Midnight  a biography of the 17th century poet George Herbert by John  Drury: ‘Enjoy your Symptom’ –  cultural criticism by Slavoj Zizek: and the poetry of Edwin Morgan. I have just finished Extreme Metaphors – by J G Ballard.

Which three words best describes you?

Philosophical. Creative. Dog-lover.

What are you working on at the moment?

I am revising some visual and non-visual poems for a crossover collection coming out later this year, plus about five poems which are at various stages of completion.

Can you tell our readers about Semiotics and Visual Poetry?

Visual poetry draws upon both visual and verbal semiotic modes i.e. they are an example of what is termed multi-modality. Here’s some provisional definitions:

  • semiotics = the theory of codes or signs
  • semiotic channel = sight, sound, the sense of movement e. kinaesthetics, touch, taste, smell.
  • semiotic mode = conventionalised codes for communication
  • multi-modality = more than one semiotic mode used simultaneously.
  • visual art = any direction, non-discrete, iconic
  • Verbal art = specific direction, discrete, symbolic .

What I’m doing at the moment is using the semiotic channel of sight i.e. the written word (specifically the semiotic mode known as the English language). To process this semiotic mode, you are drawing upon your knowledge of the conventions of English, as your brain is busily accepting or rejecting possibilities of meaning. Hopefully, what you receive from my writing is not too distant from what I am trying to convey! Let’s look at a visual poem:

SUNSET

 

                  O

 

h o r i z      n

      h o r i z O n

                                                     h o r i z O n

 

h o r i z      n

When you process this visual poem, you are simultaneously invoking two semiotic modes: the title ‘Sunset’ is verbal, with a relatively limited meaning. However, the variations in the word ‘horizon’ and the letter ‘O’, which feature in a different position in each line, act out meaning i.e. they are potentially verbally, visually and kinaesthetically meaningful, as they simulate the sun’s movement caused by the Earth’s rotation. I particularly like the fact that a blank space conveys potential meaning, too!

When analysed, the processes of realizing multimodal artefacts turn out to be a surprisingly sophisticated series of mental activities.

Re:Bus, below, again utilises the left to write and top to bottom of the page conventions of English, but despite seeming to be more complicated is probably less sophisticated than ‘Sunset’. (The title is a pun, another technical term for the inclusion of visual elements in a written text is a ‘rebus’ and one reference in this poem is a bus.) I won’t cover all elements, because they should be fairly obvious.

The clock face suggests Time.

The N suggests I.

l8 (= late), d8 (= date) and 4 got 10 (= for-got-ten), common-places of texting, include numeric shapes, which are converted to sounds, then to meaning in a different context.

The image of the Earth is used both literally and metaphorically (and hyperbolically).

The twisted arrow  suggests  ‘turn’ and ‘up’.

2 – a shape becomes a sound, then meaning in a different context.

The cross is used in a similar way to the numbers – a shape becomes a sound, then meaning in a different context..

The tick is used in the same way – a shape becomes a sound, then meaning in a different context..

The strange image (  * ˜ *  ) hopefully suggests a bear. (A koala bear in fact – this is my favourite bit of the poem).

The two bent lines are meant to be a ‘knee’, from which you remove the k, then add a d.

Finally, the last line features a quarter being indicated past a three, plus the image of a bus.

RE:BUS

‰  was getting  l8,

had   N   4 got 10  the right  d8?

Where on  ü were they;

would they   È 2day?

Bgan  2  get  nervous, † and franP,

couldn’t  (  * ˜ *  )  2B  thought  T  H  I  C  K:

no   ╗←─k+d   2 fuss,

they missed the  3→¼ v!

 

Time was getting late,

had I forgotten the right date?

Where on earth were they;

would they turn up today?

Began to get nervous, cross and frantic,

couldn’t bear to be thought thick:

no need to fuss,

they missed the quarter past three bus!

Rather like explaining a joke, this explication of multi-modality ends up squeezing some fun out of the almost instant set of realizations actually achieved, but I hope it has been useful – and that you enjoyed the poems! Here’s two more that use alternative visual effects to work on yourselves:

THE ICEBERG THAT SANK THE TITANIC

Well,

it wasn’t

my fault, I thought

I had the ocean to myself:

drifted off the ice-shelf, was

 hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

enjoying  the  sensation  of  a  casual,  carefree

melt. Who would have thought, in the wide

North Atlantic? Out of the mist came the

Titanic! Yes, changed my life – as I

said to the wife – my big chance

to  become  a  celebrity.

Next time  you see

a movie with

some ice in

that’ll

be me.

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World Book Day at the Pantry: Boy by Roald Dahl: reviewed by Kev Milsom

Boy

‘This is not an autobiography. I would never write a history of myself. On the other hand, throughout my young days at school and just afterwards, a number of things happened to me that I have never forgotten…I didn’t have to search for any of them. All I had to do was skim them off the top of my consciousness and write them down. Some are funny. Some are painful. Some are unpleasant. I suppose that is why I remembered them so vividly. All are true.’

At some point, probably within our earlier years of life, countless of us will have been captivated and enthralled by the words of Roald Dahl – a gifted writer who brought his imaginative stories to life with a succession of memorable fictional characters in books such as: ‘Charlie and the Chocolate Factory’, ‘The BFG’ & ‘James and the Giant Peach’.

A lesser-known book of the author – who would have celebrated his 100th birthday in 2016 – is a 1984 autobiography, simply entitled ‘Boy’. Within these pages lie a multitude of adventures and tales from the author’s childhood during the 1920’s and 30’s. It is also the first half of Roald’s autobiographical accounts, being followed by his amazing story during World War II in a book entitled ‘Solo’ – a thoroughly recommended read.

Boy’ begins in his father’s native Norway and gives a fascinating account of the Dahl family.  At times, even though the accounts are true, it’s difficult not to get caught up in Roald’s writing style and wonder if he is building up more fascinating characters for a new novel. Tales abound, such as how his father lost an arm aged 14, yet successfully managed to adapt without it and never saw it as a problem in life…the only mild inconvenience ever aired being the fact that he could never manage to remove the top from a boiled egg.

Clearly, school years play a pivotal role in Roald’s childhood and it is here that we gleam fascinating insights into life during the 1920’s. In particular the reader is witness to the cruel barbarity of life within the interior of educational facilities; mostly undiscovered by the parents of the poor children enduring often-terrible treatment by vicious teachers.

Not that Roald was an angel. Carried along by his words, the reader is exposed to the planning and operation of ‘The Great Mouse Plot of 1924’ – a true escapade of naughty boys doing naughty things.  With a suitably wincing expression we can also discover how adenoids were removed in the 1920’s and also how Roald nearly lost his nose when the entire Dahl family decided to drive an early, massive car along tiny country lanes, complete with just an hour’s driving lesson. (No tests required back then).

The writing style of the book is magnetic, but then it’s Roald Dahl and perhaps we might expect nothing less from a writing master. However, there is something magical occurring between the pages of ‘Boy’. Writing this in 1984, Roald was already 68 years of age and yet the writing appears fresh; spoken like a child in a child’s wondrous, enquiring voice.

Through his words we witness the horror of public schools, with often-vile headmasters and the rigmarole of ‘fagging’. Yet we also hear of pleasant, inspiring teachers. We also visit the Norwegian fjords and delight in Roald’s innocence at encountering such natural beauty, alongside his loving, caring family.

By the time we reach the final pages of the book we have walked alongside Roald through his entire childhood and watched him arrive at a responsible adulthood, just prior to the outbreak of war in 1939. The fact that this is the easiest of processes is due to the beautiful writing structure of Roald Dahl.

Always the story-teller.

 ‘The writer walks out of his workroom in a daze. He wants a drink. He needs it. It happens to be a fact that nearly every writer of fiction in the world drinks more whisky than is good for him. He does it to give himself faith hope and courage. A person is a fool to become a writer. His only compensation is absolute freedom. He has no master except his own soul and that I am sure is why he does it.’ 

 

Lyrical Craft: Inky Interview with musician Jonathan Tarplee: by Deborah Edgeley

JT Liverpool

 

Your album Attachment Theories. Love the title. Does it set the theme, if you like, for the rest of your songs on the album? Or is your album a mixture of allsorts?

Well, both! There are songs on there about love, lust, warmongering leaders, wanting to escape from things, about nature, all kinds of things. I thought if one thing connects them all it’s the idea of Attachment; to people, nature, relationships between the powerful and their underlings and so on, but I made it plural because the album is not really a cohesive whole, conceptually. It’s as if each song has a different tone, theme or is a different ‘theory’ if you like. I’m glad you like the title, thanks!

As a songwriter, what do you care about most? What themes keep cropping up in your work?

   I think you have to write about what you care about for it to work and for you to be happy with your work in the long run, or I do anyway. I’ve sometimes tried to sort of craft a song in a more contrived way but it never really works. For me at least, it has to come from the heart and the guts, or I’m just not happy with it. Simon, the bassist in my band pointed out that water is a recurrent theme in my songs. I do love rivers, the sea, the rain. All seem full of endless bounty and mystery to me.

Could you give us a couple of examples of your own favourite lyrics?

I think that song lyrics are not really like poetry, they don’t really work on their own, they are at one with the music and don’t really make sense without it. Now that my excuse is out of the way though, I’m pretty pleased with the second verse of my song ‘Galleries’. It goes;

             Now the air is moving, as slowly as the night.

             The moonlight swims and the angels swing from star to satellite.

              Now I am a-gliding, to where the sun will rise,

             The bluebird calls, a feather falls, the hills are hypnotised.

You live on a barge and recently experimented with home recording in your Boat Saloon. How important is your creative space and has it influenced your work? Do you get inspired more being surrounded by water and nature?

Yes, this is an ongoing experiment with home-recording and I’m hoping to be able to release another album of songs later this year if it goes well. I love living on my boat, and love living with the seasons and being close to nature, but I’m not sure how important it is in terms of how my music turns out. If I lived in a city-centre flat, would my music be much different? I’m not really sure. Music making, and listening, is a very internal experience for me, something often done in the middle of the night, alone. Having said that, as someone who is influenced at least as much by American music as by British music, I’ve noticed that a lot of music from the States feels much more spacious, like the country itself, compared to the often small-town, kitchen-sink stuff of say UK Indie bands, and I love both types,  but I suppose that must mean your surroundings make a difference!

Do you like poetry?

I love poetry and think it can move you on a simultaneously intellectual and spiritual way like no other art form. I really should read more though, I’m a dabbler and not knowledgeable in poetry. The last time I read a great deal of poetry was when I saw my Mum’s copy of The Rattle Bag. I borrowed it and really devoured the poetry in there and nearly all of it really inspired me, immensely. I feel a lot of the time though that life is a race against time and I must get my music out there while I’m young enough to spend many hours working on music, practicing guitar and rehearsing and writing songs, as well as travelling from stage to stage. So reading more books, poetry, watching more films and stuff are things I think I can do when I’m too told to move as much! I know I am wrong, but I am still going about my life in this way… a lot of things are on hold!

How important are lyrics in music? Are they always necessary? Does music stand alone or does the listener need a suggestion through lyrics of what the song is about?

I sometimes think the best, purest music would surely not need any words. I think music is pure emotional energy; to me it is not a thing or a product or a piece of art that represents feelings, music IS the feelings, it is spirituality, it is the voice of the Cosmos. It’s the feelings or energy of the music and words together that count. I love songs though, I love lyrics. I went to see Simon Armitage and he was asked about song lyrics, and he came up with the best answer to this I’ve heard. He said something about a lyric, it might have been from a Morrissey song or something as I remember, but the important thing he said was that the lyric on it’s own was clichéd and crass, but when listened to together with the music in that song, it created an incredible epiphany that would not have been possible without both the words and music.

Which authors inspire you and why?

 A book which really inspired me greatly is called ‘Pip Pip: A Sideways look at Time’ by Jay Griffiths. I don’t believe in the concept of ‘genius’ but if I’m wrong then Jay Griffiths is the closest thing to genius that I have come across. You really need to read it a few times and it’s hard to explain how multi-layered it is, but I suppose it’s a kind of frenzied intellectual/spiritual essay on contested ideas of time. It is deeply pro-nature and deeply feminist among other things, but so much more as well.

I’m also slightly embarrassed that I’ve got into reading all Mark Billingham’s Tom Thorne novels. I definitely never saw myself as a reader of detective books, but I was intrigued as I knew of the author, as a comedy-lover, as a stand-up comedian. The first book of his I read was free so I just read it out of curiosity because I love comedy so much! These books are very much in-genre and clichéd if you like, but his character development is superb. Thorne is a sort of broken man but one you can really identify with, he as much a victim of modern bureaucracy and business-speak as he is of the people trying to kill him. There’s also a kind of earthy repugnance to these stories too which remind me of great horror films. I really enjoy the roller-coaster ride they take you on!

When composing a new song, do you think of melody first and then lyrics, or is it vice versa? Or does it just depend?!

It just depends. Some start with a riff, a whole tune, a lyric, sometimes it all just comes out in one go and I think those tend to be the best ones.

Your band The Blue Yellows have a song called ‘No Tobacco, no Jesus’. Quirky! What are the ideas behind the title?

That goes back to Jay Griffiths again! I think it was in a travel book she wrote. She was writing about how some of the Christian missionaries would travel to remote areas and ‘convert’ the locals with the help of gifts of cigarettes and other things. One of the tribal chiefs was quoted, on being asked about whether they had really given up thousands of years of their beliefs in forest spirits and so on, saying something like ‘well put it this way, “no tobacco, no hallelujah!” . Of course, I mis-remembered the quote and turned it into a silly song!

 Share with us one of your favourite memories of performing your work.

There’s nothing that beats rocking out with your band and completely losing yourself, forgetting who you are and what you are and just being at one with the music. Some of the funniest times are at festivals though, there are often little toddlers and they will dance their little socks off. They don’t care whether you’re cool or not, they just react to the music. I remember playing a festival in the pouring rain and there was this tiny toddler sat right in front of us, cross-legged on the grass under a transparent umbrella in the streaming rain, just staring at us, enthralled and amazed at what we were doing. Hilarious!

Website: http://jonathantarplee.com

Blueyellows recordings: http://www.blueyellows.co.uk/

”Idiosyncratic yet highly articulate lyrics married with welcoming guitar melodies”, The Musician.

“Passionate, humorous, communal sounding expressions.. engaging”, Oliver Arditi.

“Mesmerizing guitar skills”, WillsImmusic Blog.

“Powerful voice”, Here Comes The Flood.

“Beautifully crafted songs with bite and edge”, Mind, Body & Boogie festival.

“Full of Melody & Honesty”, Nigel Stonier.

 

 

 

Books from the Pantry: The Boy Who Drew The Future by Rhian Ivory: reviewed by Kev Milsom

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‘They pushed us onto the street. Maman said they’d called her a “sorcière”, a witch, told her they’d heard the rumours in the village. The fat one pointed at the road to Halstead.

“Look for a tall building with gates and ask to see the Guardians, maybe they’ll believe you when you write ‘widow’! Or maybe they’ll put you in a yellow jacket along with all the other sinners,” he shouted at us, laughing.

They said more things about my father that I didn’t understand, harsh-sounding words Maman wouldn’t let me ask about. She waved my questions away, muttering curses under her breath as we stood outside wondering where to go.’

It’s 1865 and Blaze Ambroise, a mysterious boy of teenage years and French descent – along with his canine companion, suitably named ‘Dog’ – are squatting in an old manor house in Essex, England. Recently orphaned and impoverished, the boy is shunned by the locals, except on rare occasions when they require assistance via his deft skills in herbalism and healing. On other occasions, his unique talent at prophecy comes to light whenever he is given a pencil and a piece of paper. At such times, Blaze and Dog are given food and aid and hounded for psychic answers to the personal problems of the selfish town populace, before once more being shunned by those he has assisted and left alone.

Over a century later, a teenage boy named Noah Saunders is moving around the United Kingdom and enrolling in many new schools, due to his father’s work as a photographer. His one desire in life is to find a sense of routine normality and now, having just moved to Essex, he is hoping to put a troubled past behind him…although a ‘normal’ life always seems to escape his clutches. Could this be due to his mysterious propensity for intense empathy with others, as well as the ability to draw unusual drawings that appear to foretell the future of other people?

And so we are introduced to the two compelling, main characters in Rhian Ivory’s novel, The Boy Who Drew the Future, each sharing similar, eerie qualities and coincidences that bind them quickly into memory.

The style of the book is refreshingly simple, with two sets of first-person narratives being told one at a time. Therefore the reader gets a chapter of modern-day Noah, before switching back to the 1860s with Blaze and Dog in the next chapter, and so on. This structure allows the reader plenty of time to adapt to the similarities and differences between the two characters and their personal accounts; but what really hits home from the very first page is the brilliant standard of writing being demonstrated on the pages.

Simply put, Rhian Ivory’s descriptions are masterful. From describing locations and objects, down to her vivid portrayal of people, Rhian excels at inviting the reader into every scene and using her skill as a wordsmith to alight our imagination. Most importantly, for us student writers who dream one day of attaining success and aplomb within our writing careers, this book is a true masterclass in how to get it precisely right – how to lay out simple words and sentences into truly compelling literature and draw the reader effortlessly into the story with an easy, delightful flow.

‘The inside of the circle was dull and worn with time as if it had rested on many different fingers over the years. I wondered who had worn it last and who would wear it next. I could sense it wasn’t new. It felt weighty as it sat heavy in my hand, full of history. I clutched it, my fingers closing around it like a secret. I imagined the green glowing through my skin, lighting me up, like an emerald fire that could burn, marking me out as a thief.’

As readers, we are effortlessly transported between centuries, alternately following the very real, life-threatening dangers faced by Blaze, before swinging back to the modern day, where Noah’s tensions lie more within school, with new friends and ground-shaking emotions to deal with. As the book unfolds, we are kept wondering on the mysterious connection between the two, young individuals. In achieving this balance, Rhian Ivory doesn’t waste a single line of writing in holding us tightly to her fascinating story.

An absolute gem of a book.

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